The Query Formula
Masterclass
Take your page from dry info to a full of voice and hooky query that you'll be proud to send to your dream agents!
Let me prove that this works.
The had their breakthroughs and I'm going to help you do the same.
Wouldn't it be amazing if you could
Sit down and NOT agonize over how to condense your 100k word story into a single page?
Easily turn all your book info into a tightly written query, full of voice and personality that hooks from word one?
Confidently and excitedly send to your list of dream agents because your query is oh so engaging?
She is the query queen!!
“Not only is Bethany the ‘Author Whisperer,’ she is also the Query Queen! I encourage all my friends to take her workshops! She’s the best!”
hey there!
I'm Bethany
And trust me, if you're on this page, I understand you. I see you. I know you. I hear you and feel you. I'm a writer, too and work with writers day in and day out. And if there's anything I've learned over the near two decades of being in this zany biz, it's that querying can be soooo rewarding and yet so, so hard!
There's so much you have to do, from condensing thousands of words down to just a page, to injecting some major voice and, of course, making it hooky as can be.
But here's the thing...
It can be done. And it can be done by YOU! Yes, there is an art to query writing but there's also a science, and once you see it? It'll be like the magic trick is finally revealed!
I know that queries are a vital step on your publication journey, and your heart is just on fire to share this book with your dream agents. That's so incredible and I'm so excited for you!
Let's make sure you're putting all that magic in your query!
I've worked with...
But you don't have to be overwhelmed by them. Why? Because while there's an art to them, there's also a science.
The Query
formula
THE ART AND SCIENCE OF QUERY WRITING HAS NEVER BEEN EASIER WITH THE FIVE STEP FORMULA
- Easily identify which parts of your book to put in your query.
- Discover the simple method to add your own unique voice and style.
- Unsure about that bio? You'll have a new appreciation for what to put in.
- Defeat the bores and bloat of most queries and instead, learn to inject amazing voice and stakes.
amazing human/coach/editor.
I just have to say Bethany is an amazing human/coach/editor and anyone is lucky to work with her! What a generous, knowledgeable, down to earth, and light spirit! Excited to do more!
Here’s how the masterclass breaks down...
The Masterclass
In this masterclass, you’ll learn:
- The five things you must know to elevate and uplevel your query.
- Why your own voice is so important to the process.
- How to connect with the heart of your book and show it on the page.
From Scratch
In this training, you'll see:
- How I write a query from scratch using the 5 principals learned in the masterclass.
- How you can take a simple idea and add a hook and voice.
- Why you must remember your story magic and imbue it in the query.
- And more.
Real Time Edits
In this module, you’ll see
- 2 queries edited in real time by me, with an eye towards hook, clarity, logical and more.
- How you can streamline plot threads to really make a query impactful.
- Why specificity is so important.
Super secret bonus!
This bonus is only available to students who take the masterclass but trust me, it's a good one!
“Bethany’s unique writing [lessons] are NEXT LEVEL! With her help, I was able to get agented. She really knows her stuff!!”
Whether you’re trying to make your query stand out or nail the voice in your opening pages Bethany knows just what your story needs and has the expertise to make it shine. There’s nobody better to help you transform your writing.”
Here's what you're learning
Step One: You'll learn to get that pacing right!
Step Two: Make your whole query unique.
Step Three: Take it from information to pure entertainment!
Step Four: Hook your agents by showing off your story's stakes.
Step Five: Infuse it with a one of a kind magic only YOU can bring.
Plus: See query critiques in real time and a query from scratch using the five step formula.
But right now, you get everything for
ONLY $27
You're one click away
How it works:
- Once you purchase, you'll get an email from me with login details!
- You'll have immediate access to the masterclass and your bonus.
- And then, let the breakthroughs and ah-ha moments begin!
perfect class
You know it's a perfect class with Bethany when your brain physically feels like it's packed with new writing gems and lightbulb moments. Guys, take her course. Just do it.
