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Expert. Personalized. Intensive.

Whether you're refining your first draft or perfecting a nearly finished manuscript, here's where you get the personalized coaching and feedback you've been craving. Together, we'll strengthen your story, fix any issues, and make your book ready for agents and readers, fast.

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Full Edit Strength and Sculpt 

Get your full manuscript read and edited within just a few weeks. This edit checks for everything from character goals and motivations to romantic chemistry to clarity in action pieces. It checks interiority, worldbuilding, voice, pacing and so much more. This is an excellent gut check of your manuscript so you have the best odds with readers and agents. Perfect for writers who are trad publishing or self-publishing.

WHAT'S INCLUDED:
  • One full edit of your manuscript.
  • A 90 minute Zoom call to go over all of my editorial notes and help you brainstorm ways to apply edits.
  • Unlimited email correspondence during the time of work.
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Story Surgeon Edit

The deep dives of deep dives. Funky dialogue? I'm going to point it out. Huge chunks of info dumping? My highlighter will get it. Exposition just not working? I'll point that out, too. Your document will be loaded with comments, questions, markups and suggestions as I edit so then you can be shown exactly what I'm talking about. Perfect for writers who really want to be shown the how's, where's, and what's of editing their story.

WHAT'S INCLUDED:
  • One full edit of your manuscript.
  • On-page markups and comments in the document itself.
  • A 60 minute Zoom call to go over all of my editorial notes and help you brainstorm ways to apply edits.
  • Unlimited email correspondence during the time of work.
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Private Coaching

You. Me. A Zoom room. Together, we're going to answer all of your questions, get your story shaped up, and you can even add my famed Story Roadmap to the mix so then you can write without hold up. Perfect for writers looking to hone their ideas or want to get laser-focused with their books and career.

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THE PROCESS:

How it Works

 
STEP ONE

Fill Out the Form

Easy-peasy. You'll fill out the form at the very bottom of this page and I or someone from my team will get back to you within 24 hours.

STEP TWO

Receive Your Welcome Packet

This packet contains a detailed rundown of the service(s) you're requesting. It will also include your investment quote, contract and invoice.

STEP THREE

Make It Official

Once I recieve your signed contract back plus invoice, it's off to the races we go! I'll get started on your work and you're this much closer to achieving your goals!

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"I've won six book awards!"

I owe everything to Bethany. She’s a critique partner, editor, cheerleader, brainstorming guru, and wizard for seeing the whole picture at the same time fine tuning the nitty gritty details.

Carolyn Armstrong,
️Gold Recipient of Mom’s Choice Awards for AT THE EDGE OF THE ICE

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"gotten an offer after I revised based on things I learned."

The lessons reshaped the way I think about writing…oh, and I may or may not have gotten an offer after I revised based on things I learned. πŸ’•

DEMI MICHELE, repped by Michelle Jackson at LCS Literary
 

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"I know for a fact I wouldn't have been able to finish as quickly or as smoothly.

I used so many of your techniques and tidbits of advice while working on this story, and I’ve gotten really good feedback from readers so far! I’m so thankful for all of your help and encouragement.”

Rachael Waldburger, author of The First Wordweaver 

By the end of our time together, you'll have:

New Clarity & Understanding

Whether you're writing for the first time or self-publishing your tenth story, your edits and coaching will show you ways to breathe new life into your stories.

Solid Characters that Works

Because great characters are great stories. It's what makes readers draw pictures and create fanfic. And that's a huge piece of my editing process.

A Repeatable, Lifelong Skill

What I'll be showing you isn't going to make your head spin. It's designed for you to easily understand and apply to your current WIP and all future WIPs, too.

Stories You're Thrilled to Share

My edits are designed to excite you and give you a big boost of confidence so you'll be thrilled to share your work!

READY?

Let's Go!

Hey, I'm Bethany and I am so, so ready to get working with you! Editing stories, coaching authors...it's what I do and I'm mighty good at it. So whether you're struggling turning ideas into stories, or your frustrated with your story itself, I definitely can help you. So choose your package and let's get started. I can't wait to work with you!

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Get the edits that will save you time, money and aggravation.

A's to your Q's

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"I was able to get agented."

β€œBethany’s unique writing [lessons] are NEXT LEVEL! With her help, I was able to sculpt my novel and get agented. She really knows her stuff!!”

Emily Rae, repped by  

Are you ready to hang out and make your story the best you've ever written??

Please fill out the form below. My calendar fills up quickly, so don't wait to get yourself officially booked. We're going to have a blast!